The idea was very solid. I would have enjoyed the poem more if it was slightly longer.
I agree it could have been a little longer, but I love the pattern you wrote this in and the word choice. Great job Han!
I agree also, I love the word choice, it described it very well. Good job!
The idea was very solid. I would have enjoyed the poem more if it was slightly longer.
ReplyDeleteI agree it could have been a little longer, but I love the pattern you wrote this in and the word choice. Great job Han!
ReplyDeleteI agree also, I love the word choice, it described it very well. Good job!
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