Your poem was very interesting because it included a brief description of how you feel about the rain as well as the chemical composition of rain and the variations of liquid. It was an interesting idea, but you could have executed it better by adding a little more than just random words.
Your poem was very interesting because it included a brief description of how you feel about the rain as well as the chemical composition of rain and the variations of liquid. It was an interesting idea, but you could have executed it better by adding a little more than just random words.
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